Lisa St John wrote:

The memoir I am working on is 80% done (I think). I would like someone to read it and let me know if it works. I have poems and notebook fragments interspersed with the chapters, so my questions are these:

1. Does this format work for you, as a reader?

2. Is there any part of the story of which you would like more elaboration?

It's about my late husband's long illness and eventual death from cancer, but it's really about how I am making a truce with grief. Any takers? ...................lisa

I would be happy to read and answer your questions, but I work as an editor and manuscript coach, which means I'd have to charge you. You can learn more about me at https://writeradvice.com/manuscript-consultation. Read the comments and see if I offer something you need.

Thanks,

Lynn

Lgood67334@comcast.net.